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The All Around Cozy Home

My home is super cozy Especially when there’s a fireplace When there’s blankets, couches and beds, It is even more cozy the warmer it gets Spring starting the year right after the winter, but then the summer will hit In the summer it is burning of heat, but with the sunscreen is on the better it gets In the fall the colors are pretty but, not when they are falling right off the tree When the snowflakes sprinkle Right off the deck No matter what season it is, my home is cozy in every way My super cozy home is the coziest of them all, Especially with all of the blankets and couches will make it all sprawl. Good start, Peter. You have a great idea that your poem is about. I would put the seasons in order, example spring, summer, fall, winter…...you have included summer, fall and winter, but maybe you want to include each spring as well.

Peter

Grade 4

Nobleton, Ontario

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